As a writer, I frequently struggle with plot. Is it believable? Is it surprising? Is it exciting? Sometimes, it feels like plot is supposed to be what makes a story interesting. What makes for a cool adventure? The prevailing mindset seems to be: how high can you raise the stakes?
But I think over the last few years of writing, I’ve learned something important about the kinds of stories I want to read, and therefore write.
The stakes are important, but only for what they mean to the character.
It has to be personal.
The original trilogy is personal.
Episode 4 follows a boy on the precipice of adulthood, torn between his desire to make something of himself, his dislike of the Empire, and his own familial obligations. Luke waits around on a desert planet until it’s too late. The people who raised him are killed. He hesitated, and he lost, and now he’s going to see the fight to the end. And yeah, he’s going to recruit Han Solo to the cause, too. The fight against the Empire is personal.
In Episode 5, he grows up. He faces his enemy, but he also faces himself. The stakes are the lives of his friends, his own life, and ultimately his own integrity. And in the final chapter, he finishes what he started. He saves Han. He faces Vader, as both an adversary and family. He saves himself. He will not fall.
The stakes are not:
- a planet-killing weapon
- outnumbered pilots in a space battle
- impossible lightsaber duels
- shocking parentage
- a second planet-killing weapon
- an impossible space battle
The stakes are:
- Can Luke trust in his abilities?
- Will Han commit to the cause?
- Should Luke still try even in the imminent possibility of defeat?
- What does Luke risk of himself – not just physically but spiritually?
- What will Luke do when two of his core dreams clash? (his longing for his father and his desire to protect his friends and uphold the moral good)
- Can Luke reconcile the darkness within himself?
- What is the power of our faith in others?
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