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As a writer, I frequently struggle with plot. Is it believable? Is it surprising? Is it exciting? Sometimes, it feels like plot is supposed to be what makes a story interesting. What makes for a cool adventure? The prevailing mindset seems to be: how high can you raise the stakes?
 
But I think over the last few years of writing, I’ve learned something important about the kinds of stories I want to read, and therefore write.
 
The stakes are important, but only for what they mean to the character.
 
It has to be personal.
 
The original trilogy is personal. 
 
Episode 4 follows a boy on the precipice of adulthood, torn between his desire to make something of himself, his dislike of the Empire, and his own familial obligations. Luke waits around on a desert planet until it’s too late. The people who raised him are killed. He hesitated, and he lost, and now he’s going to see the fight to the end. And yeah, he’s going to recruit Han Solo to the cause, too. The fight against the Empire is personal.
 
In Episode 5, he grows up. He faces his enemy, but he also faces himself. The stakes are the lives of his friends, his own life, and ultimately his own integrity. And in the final chapter, he finishes what he started. He saves Han. He faces Vader, as both an adversary and family. He saves himself. He will not fall.
 
The stakes are not: 
  • a planet-killing weapon
  • outnumbered pilots in a space battle
  • impossible lightsaber duels
  • shocking parentage
  • a second planet-killing weapon
  • an impossible space battle
The stakes are:
  • Can Luke trust in his abilities?
  • Will Han commit to the cause?
  • Should Luke still try even in the imminent possibility of defeat?
  • What does Luke risk of himself – not just physically but spiritually?
  • What will Luke do when two of his core dreams clash? (his longing for his father and his desire to protect his friends and uphold the moral good)
  • Can Luke reconcile the darkness within himself?
  • What is the power of our faith in others?
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 Hey so I recently read Among the Red Stars by Gwen C. Katz. I wanted to write a super thoughtful review post, buuut hey, I have a lot going on, so instead I made a little list of things I liked about it:
  • the compelling female protagonist
  • the mostly female cast (that totally passes the Bechdel test) (or whatever the novel equivalent is)
  • stories of love: familial, platonic, and (of course) romantic
  • romance told in epistolary format
  • ...also interspersed with action-packed narrative
  • historical fiction!
  • WWII fiction!
  • women in the military
  • badass pilots
I mean, yeah, you may notice that has a lot in common with other interests of mine.
 
I’ve been waiting to read a book like this for a long time. Among the Red Stars is a YA novel that follows the adventures of Valka, a Russian pilot during WWII. Her story is based on the real adventures of the “Night Witches,” an all-female night bomber group, and some of the characters are real people. 
 
Valka’s story starts when she’s separated from her childhood best friend, Pasha, who is drafted before her. But Valka’s always dreamed of flying and jumps at the first recruitment opportunity for women pilots. While she worries about Pasha, she’s improving her flying, working towards her dream... and reconciling the cost of that dream. 
 
Yes, some may roll their eyes at a romance, but I loved this one. Valka never told her best friend she loved him before he left to fight (she never even got to kiss him!), but their letters sustain each other through the war. The format is a mix of epistolary and first-person narrative. And through their letters, we also get to see the toll the war has on them, Pasha in particular, who feels he's not as strong as Valka.
 
The story is not just a romance; it is a story about all kinds of love: familial, platonic. Valka signs up for the war effort with her cousin Iskra; they grew up together since Iskra’s parents were arrested for treason, and read more like sisters than cousins. But by joining the war, Iskra puts herself at risk, and Valka’s distress over this is palpable and compelling. 
 
The story is well-written, and a good mix of action, intensity, and history. Highly recommended!
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I finally finished Good Omens!!!!!!

I know everyone else has probably already watched it and said their bit by now but I just wanted to flail about it for a little bit so! I quite enjoyed it. It's a very unique style (which I was probably more conscious of because I watched it with my spouse, who thought it was a bit strange at times), but I think it fit the mood perfectly. Now I say that, but bear this in mind: it's been over ten years since I've read the book. While I know undoubtedly that I very much loved the book, had you asked me any time before the Good Omens panel at NYCC, I would have only been able to tell you the following about it:
  • an angel and a demon team up to prevent the apocalypse
  • there's a boy who's, like, uh, the anti-christ? maybe?
  • oh wait, something something 4 horsemen riding motorcycles
That's it, that's the most I could have told you. If even that. It's quite bizarre too, because you would think something so good wouldn't be so forgettable -- it feels wrong to say that, but it was. I think even a year after I read it, I was recommending it to someone and I was like "...well I can't really tell you what it's about, but just trust me that it's very good." I think it must be "forgettable" (for lack of a better term) because there's quite a lot going on, it's a lot to keep track of.

I'd been meaning to reread the book for awhile, but anyways when I found out they were making a show, I hesitated and decided not to because well, my experience with Harry Potter tells me that it's never as enjoyable that way. I just end up focusing on what was Different, which isn't the point. 

So thoughts:

Michael Sheen was brilliant, as per usual, and so was David Tennant (not a Dr. Who fan so I'm less familiar with his work). I also enjoyed Anathema's scenes, and Pulsifer's (I most definitely forgot about their subplot). Also, that's it, Aziraphale and Crowley have perfected the slow burn and there can be no other. Has anyone seen the memes about all the times they happen to run into each other -- including the apocalypse -- being God's attempts to get them together? Like a writer frustrated that her characters just won't seem to get together already? Phenomenal. A+. 

Enjoyed the music, cinematography, editing, all of it. It's sort of beautiful and the aesthetic is just spot on. It does move kind of fast, which was only frustrating for me because Amazon doesn't play well with Chromecast -- we had to cast the browser tab, basically, which meant we had some buffer issues occasionally, but mostly it was fine. I just want to watch it over again and reabsorb it. Maybe I'll reread the book again soon. Because what I love the most is the story, the message, and all. 

ANYWAYS. I'm very much looking forward to being able to reblog Good Omens posts on tumblr rather than quickly scrolling past them trying to avoid spoilers. Hooray! 
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This week has just been plain rough for me, starting with some bad real life stuff at the beginning and then just a long stretch of sad fiction: on Wednesday, I watched The Clone Wars episode "The Lawless" (huge spoilers, do not click if you haven't seen or don't already know); Thursday my husband put on The West Wing episode "Gaza" (so like, YEAH); last night I watched The Good Place "Pandemonium;" and because none of that was enough, apparently, I just watched "The Wrong Jedi."

So. I'd say my emotions have been in pandemonium all freaking week!

the sad place )

the wrong episode to watch when you've already had a sad week )

OKAY WELL I'M WIPED SOMEONE PLEASE SEND ME SILLY FLUFF PLEASE AND THANK YOU

PS: I AM lucky in that my friend took me out to Cheesecake Factory & Build a Bear today as a late bday present, and I got myself a new stuffed animal! Rey Skyhopper was most appreciated during my watch of the TCW. :)
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I just watched The Clone Wars s5:e16, "The Lawless" and...

the WORST of spoilers, do not read if you don't already Know )
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i do love the good place and i did enjoy tonight’s episode but

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Also, as a side note, I'm gonna be trying a Thing tomorrow for my bday, a sort of gift-it-forward thing, so if you think you might be interested, please check out my tumblr tomorrow at 11 a.m. EST

ETA: I know I have comments I need to respond to! I was busy with some real life stuff this week but will try to catch up tomorrow

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Today's the day! The sun is shining! The tank is clean! -- Wait, no, that's not right.

*ahem* I FINALLY WATCHED THE ONDERON ARC.

(And by the way on that note, I must mention the sun is very much not shining.)

Anyways.

Overall, this arc absolutely lived up to my anticipation for it. Ever since I started writing rebelcaptain fic and researching Saw, I’ve looked forward to seeing his younger self. Besides that, the story with the other characters is also incredibly compelling. And hey! Lux didn’t bother me half as much as he did in the past. I guess that’s growth.

I thought the art for this arc was amazing, specifically the scene when they first land on Onderon and you see the backdrop of the stars behind the jungle canopy. The character development and relationships were very much the kind of conflict and dynamics I'm interested in (I mean, I could do less with love triangles, but you know what? This one didn't really bother me that much.) And the themes were on point!

More specific thoughts )
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I just watched The Clone Wars episode "A Friend in Need" (S4:E14) and while I know I've probably seen weirder episodes, something about this one just struck me as particularly bizarre. It's all over the map in terms of tone and writing, and it feels like they were trying to cover everything, but it's done kind of sloppily. We've got romance tropes (fake engaged! kissing as a cover/excuse!), but it's weird; really dark themes with the Death Watch involved, and even some droid rights stuff thrown in, because why not?

As a side note, Ahsoka looks absolutely baller in her furry winter coat, and it's become clear to me that it must be a prerequisite to the Fulcrum position to own fashionable winter gear. 

Anyways! I watched this episode twice just to fully wrap my brain around it, perplexed observations below the cut (because spoilers, not just for this episode, too)!

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